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Frozen_Rose · Trimis: 25/03/2010 17:40 Titlul subiectului: My creations.My life

am atat poezii ,cat si desene

Savior`s poem

I.A restless soul is looking for an answer
A desire is burning like a flame
She`s tired of seeing them living in shame
She`s tired of ugliness and anger

II. She wonders why they have changed so much
They`re confused,like mouses trepped in a hutch
A lonely whisper was caughet by the air
"I want to be free again"

III.They think they are alive,but their souls are dead
And there`s none alive to give them a helping heand
They don`t want to see the truth
They think is right what they do

IV.The world doesn`t need promises and lies
They must see the truth behind their closed eyes
They must make things right before it`s to late
They must build a better future,a better fate

V. They are like zombies, afraid to say what they feel
Addicteve to each other
They live in a world of illusion where nothing`s real
They always lived under someones`s order

VI.A restless soul is looking for an answer
She wishes to save the kingdom,to make the things better
She wantes to save herself,or at last to try
Untill the red flame of desire is still burning on the sky

va rog scuzati greselile gramaticale

si desen:
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[/url] e mai vechi, celor noi inca nu le-am facut poza
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raven · Trimis: 25/03/2010 17:53 Titlul subiectului:

Imi plac. Poezia e nespus de interesanta, iar in engleza suna si mai frumos.
Acum nu prea imi arde mie de comentat, dar am zis, e foarte interesanta.
Strofa a patra imi place, asa e nu putem trai in minciuna.
Nu stiu ce mai zic. Sa mai pui si data viitoare.
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Kasumi · Trimis: 25/03/2010 21:01 Titlul subiectului:

poezia imi place foarte mult...foarte realista! bravo!
toata mi-a placut,iar daca ar fi sa aleg o strofa as alege...hmm,toate! :-)

nu am una preferata :-P

sa mai pui cand vei avea timp sau chef de postat...
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Frozen_Rose · Trimis: 03/04/2010 13:28 Titlul subiectului:

Why?
by Frozen Rose
I.Why do you try in vain
To do what you can`t
Why do you try in vain
To don`t feel anymore pain?

II.Why do you always dream
Why are you afraid to scream?
Why do you try to be
Who you can`t?

III.Why,why we always need
Someone to tell us "you`re good"
Why can`t we succed
To be always in a good mood?

IV.Why do we give up
To our dreams to all
Why do we stand and watch
Our world to fall?

V.I was trying to be someone else
I was trying to live intense
To fell the joy of my life
To survive

VI.But now I know that is all a lie
An imaginary world
And I`m incapable to say any word...
Goodbye...

VII. Goodbye my dreams
Goodbye my wishes
Goodbye my imaginary future
Goodbye all

VIII.Why can`t we handle with pain
Why do we cry tears in vain?
Why do we try to be
Someone else

IX.Why can`t we be realistic
Why are we so negative
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Kasumi · Trimis: 03/04/2010 14:10 Titlul subiectului:

ce-mi place!!!!!!!!!!! e super poezia!

ai putea sa o pui si pe o linie melodica si ti-ar iesi...mama-mama :w00t:

ia incearca si vezi ce iti iese ;-)

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Reila · Trimis: 16/04/2010 21:22 Titlul subiectului:

pentru a 2 sau a 3 oara cand sunt de acord cu kasumi! pune versurile astea pe muzica :-)

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Kasumi · Trimis: 17/04/2010 02:08 Titlul subiectului:

haide ma, ce " puii mei"!!! :lol:

a 2a sau a3a oara,ce sa zic.... :unsure:

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